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Friday, May 28, 2021

100 word count term 2

 This term we have been doing 100 word count. We have to write a story that has 100 word. Our teacher Miss Scott will put a google slide in our room 10 site and write in the phrases. When we write our story the phrase has to be in it. 

We have to write what week it is and write what the phrase is. Sometimes we will have a sentence to put in our story and also have to write about a photo. This one was just words that have to be in our story. The story also has to be exactly 100 words. 

Here is one of my stories from week 2.



                                     …Oar,    Rule,    Mushroom,    Wistful,    Wrinkled…

One day a Mum and her daughters Tara and Niki were going on a walk. They walked past a river and saw an old lady with wrinkled skin and a wistful look in a canoe. The lady had an oar from the 1900’s. Tara and Niki ignored the lady and kept on walking. It had been a couple of minutes and Niki was getting tired. Niki told her mum that she was tired and Tara said “It's good for you”. They kept walking and they saw a mushroom shaped house. The rule was no screaming. Tara said, “Let's go now”.










1 comment:

  1. Kia Orana Moira.
    You used a great idea saying the mushroom was a house.I used to always draw mushroom houses.It had a little chimney and 2 windows.The door was oval shaped and I put white circles on the top of the mushroom.
    The lady in the canoe,was she wearing a life jacket?.

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