This is my story about my bird named Christina. I hope you enjoy reading my story about my colourful bird.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 4 and my teacher is Mr Martyn. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Tuesday, December 1, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Super descriptive writing Moira.
ReplyDeleteYou've used some unusual words which I really like.
I have 2 birds at home.One is mixed colour of grey with a bright red tail.His name is PoPcorn.
My other bird is Pnut and he's a mixture of greens and oranges.He is a fischer's love bird.
Do you have any birds or pets at home?.
Have a wonderful holiday and Christmas.