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Friday, December 4, 2020

Haunted house

 Hello today i'm showing you writing about my haunted house. I hope you enjoy reading my story.

One morning I went on a walk with my family. Then we walked past a haunted house. It had a dirty bridge with big foot prints on it, and disgusting green water underneath it. We walked across the bridge and walked through the dusty old door and looked around the whole entire place. It was really old and haunted. We heard a bang upstairs so we went upstairs to find out what the big bang was. The bedroom closet fell onto the bed. So we ran down stairs and left the house. 

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6 comments:

  1. Mrs CassidyDecember 15, 2020 at 6:32 PM

    Hello Moira.
    I look forward to seeing your story.Looking at the illustrations you have used,it's going to be amazing.

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  2. Mrs CassidyJanuary 11, 2021 at 11:45 AM

    Good morning Moira.
    I am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog today.
    I can't wait to see what you learning you have been doing over these long holidays.

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  3. Mrs CassidyJanuary 21, 2021 at 7:52 PM

    Good evening Moira.
    I was just checking your blog to see if you had added any new posts.

    What have you been doing over these long holidays?.

    I went to mini golf last week with my daughter and tomorrow we are going to Willowbank.

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  4. Mrs CassidyJanuary 26, 2021 at 7:17 PM

    Good evening Moira.
    How are your holidays going?.
    I just thought I would check your blog to see if you had posted any new activities.

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  5. Mrs CassidyFebruary 1, 2021 at 6:40 PM

    Hello Moira.
    I am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog today.
    I am looking forward to seeing what you have been up to.
    Have a great term 1.

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  6. Mrs CassidyFebruary 7, 2021 at 7:46 PM

    Hello Moira.
    I am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have checked out your blog tonight.
    I am looking forward to seeing your new posts for Term 1.

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