Hello today i'm showing you writing about my haunted house. I hope you enjoy reading my story.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 4 and my teacher is Mr Martyn. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello today i'm showing you writing about my haunted house. I hope you enjoy reading my story.
One morning I went on a walk with my family. Then we walked past a haunted house. It had a dirty bridge with big foot prints on it, and disgusting green water underneath it. We walked across the bridge and walked through the dusty old door and looked around the whole entire place. It was really old and haunted. We heard a bang upstairs so we went upstairs to find out what the big bang was. The bedroom closet fell onto the bed. So we ran down stairs and left the house.
This is my story about my bird named Christina. I hope you enjoy reading my story about my colourful bird.
One day I was going on a walk to the park alone. Then I saw a colourful bird standing on a pointy brown tree branch with fresh pink flowers and green leaves. Then it flew to me and landed on my shoulder and started to whistle. It has a black pokey beak and brown precious eyes. I decided to name the bird Christina. I gave it some fresh bread to eat. Then I walked home and tamed it. The next day I went to the shop and bought some food and a black shiny cage.
Last week on Wednesday at 10:30 we had a fun run. Our classroom needed to to wear black clothes, and other classes dressed up in their costumes. We had to do two laps around the grassy field at Kyle park. It was just like an obstacle course. It had hurdles, inflatable bouncy castles, water slide, wet sponges, cargo net and black rubbery tyres. We did the years to year 6, 5 and 4, and the juniors came later on. The teachers were squirting us with colourful water guns. I got squirted by Mr Taylor and other teachers. While I was running I saw my brother. At the end we could do a final run around the field if we wanted to. I got really soaked by the cold water. After that we walked back across to the school and got changed to our school uniform and had our delicious lunch.
Hello welcome to my bog today i'm showing you my music story starter. We had to click one of the three links our teacher put on for us. We had to watch one and look what was happening. Then we had to write down some adjectives and a story and short sentences here's what I did
Events | Good words/Interesting words |
A little girl went downstairs to see her pet. | Happy excited |
Her pet went missing. | Worried upset sad alone mystery frightened awful |
She went inside and made missing giraffe posters | Focused frustrated lonely |
She went to hang some posters up. | Worried |
She knocked on peoples doors | Rushed shocked |
Then she went to the park to look for the giraffe. | focused |
When she was on the slide the giraffe was behind her. | Happy |
On a sunny day there was a little girl walking down her stairs with a smile on her face to see her pet. When she went outside and saw that the giraffe wasn't there. She looked very worried.After that she was looking in the bushes for her giraffe, but it wasn't anywhere. She went on the swing and thought of making missing giraffe posters, and hung them up on wooden trees. After she hung some posters up she had some more in her hand so she knocked on peoples doors and asked if they had seen her pet giraffe. Then she walked to the field and looked everywhere but her giraffe wasn't there. Then she went to a playground and looked in between the trees. Later on the giraffe came out of nowhere and scared its owner. Then the little girl was happy and had more company.
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