Hello, today I'm showing you my 100 word count I worked on last week. We had to write a story with 100 or more words it was meant to have the phrase '... it was heavier than I expected...'. I forgot to use the phrase. Here is my story with 115 words.
One day there was a cute husky named Fluffy. He was playing with the frisbee with his owner named Scarlet. She would always protect her husky because her husky is the only one to protect. The next day Scarlet went to go get some groceries. When she was Driving back she had a car crash with a man called Toby. Scarlet's dog didn’t know Scarlet had a car crash until the ambulance went to Scarlet's house and picked up Fluffy. When Fluffy saw Scarlet covered with blood Fluffy started to cry in tears. After the funeral Fluffy got adopted by another owner and would always treat his new owner the same way he treated Scarlet.
Hello Moira how are you. I like you story But you didn't put in the phase But it was heavier then I expected. Also It was mean't to be 100 words next time please get it to a 100 words.Also Was it tricky to think of a story?.
ReplyDeleteHello lyah I'm am doing good how are you. Thank you for reminding me to use the phrase. Next time I will exactly use 100 words and make sure to use the phrase. Stay safe and have a good weekend.
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