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Tuesday, December 1, 2020

This is my story about my bird named Christina. I hope you enjoy  reading my story about my colourful bird.

One day I was going on a walk to the park alone. Then I saw a colourful bird standing on a pointy brown tree branch with fresh pink flowers and green leaves. Then it flew to me and landed on my shoulder and started to whistle. It has a black pokey beak and brown precious eyes. I decided to name the bird Christina. I gave it some fresh bread to eat. Then I walked home and tamed it. The next day I went to the shop and bought some food and a black shiny cage.




1 comment:

  1. Mrs CassidyDecember 20, 2020 at 11:00 AM

    Super descriptive writing Moira.
    You've used some unusual words which I really like.
    I have 2 birds at home.One is mixed colour of grey with a bright red tail.His name is PoPcorn.
    My other bird is Pnut and he's a mixture of greens and oranges.He is a fischer's love bird.
    Do you have any birds or pets at home?.
    Have a wonderful holiday and Christmas.

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